tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post747363977953348818..comments2023-10-10T02:40:54.602-07:00Comments on Kavita: ये सज़ा क्यों दे गए ?shamahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15550777701990954859noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-91814537744657242432009-08-09T12:21:37.758-07:002009-08-09T12:21:37.758-07:00बहुत ही भावपूर्ण रचना. आभार.बहुत ही भावपूर्ण रचना. आभार.Chandan Kumar Jhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11389708339225697162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-777858177743165722009-08-09T07:29:07.139-07:002009-08-09T07:29:07.139-07:00सीता होनेका दावा न किया हमने,
वो ख़ुद को राम कह गए...सीता होनेका दावा न किया हमने,<br />वो ख़ुद को राम कह गए।<br /><br />today this type of self-worshiping and self-apreciation is being a DHAKOSALA...Neeraj Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14312648658352009451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-66511929669167207402009-08-09T00:24:47.517-07:002009-08-09T00:24:47.517-07:00सर आँखों पे चढाया जिन्हें हमने,
वो हमें निगाहों से...सर आँखों पे चढाया जिन्हें हमने,<br />वो हमें निगाहों से गिरा गए,<br />सीता होनेका दावा न किया हमने,<br />वो ख़ुद को राम कह गए।<br /><br />bahut badhiya kavita.समयचक्रhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05186719974225650425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-40532004632494469702009-08-07T04:06:15.132-07:002009-08-07T04:06:15.132-07:00shama ji
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
kya kahne , sorry ...shama ji <br /><br />waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah <br /><br />kya kahne , sorry main bahut dino baad blog me aaya hoon , aapki ye nazxm padhi aur dil ko badi tasaalli hui ji .<br />badhaivijay kumar sappattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06924893340980797554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-62332559092256036862009-08-06T11:49:00.818-07:002009-08-06T11:49:00.818-07:00सर आँखों पे चढाया जिन्हें हमने,
वो हमें निगाहों से...सर आँखों पे चढाया जिन्हें हमने,<br />वो हमें निगाहों से गिरा गए,<br /><br /><br /><br />baat to waaqai mein sahi hai.....डॉ. महफूज़ अली (Dr. Mahfooz Ali)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13152343302016007973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-44187419627002072932009-08-06T05:38:40.327-07:002009-08-06T05:38:40.327-07:00ख़ुद शामिले कारवाँ हो गए,
हमें एक उम्र तन्हाँ दे ग...ख़ुद शामिले कारवाँ हो गए,<br />हमें एक उम्र तन्हाँ दे गए... <br /><br />अच्छा लिख रही हो।<br />बधाई।डॉ. रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री 'मयंक'https://www.blogger.com/profile/09313147050002054907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-90788909792684313782009-08-06T04:31:41.091-07:002009-08-06T04:31:41.091-07:00बडे शौक से सुन रहा था ज़माना,
तुम्हीं सो गये दास्ता...बडे शौक से सुन रहा था ज़माना,<br />तुम्हीं सो गये दास्तां कहते-कहते.वन्दना अवस्थी दुबेhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048830323802336861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-68285744950389416082009-08-06T00:50:00.615-07:002009-08-06T00:50:00.615-07:00महफ़िल थी, शायरी थी, अशार थे फकत नज्में,
बैठे आप थे...महफ़िल थी, शायरी थी, अशार थे फकत नज्में,<br />बैठे आप थे खामोश, धीरे से दास्ताँ कह गए...वजूदhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16837054003184246989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-63694542955094859232009-08-05T20:12:16.140-07:002009-08-05T20:12:16.140-07:00sundar!
yahee zindagi ki katu sachchaaie hai ! au...sundar! <br />yahee zindagi ki katu sachchaaie hai ! aur aapne ise bakhoobi qalambadhh kiya hai.<br />badhaai!!Pradeep Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04707624643651190396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-11377195307384947282009-08-05T18:40:41.823-07:002009-08-05T18:40:41.823-07:00bada pyaara sa ulahna,
sunder rachna.bada pyaara sa ulahna, <br /><br />sunder rachna.Yogesh Verma Swapnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01456159788604681957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-47561534389405041342009-08-05T08:22:34.104-07:002009-08-05T08:22:34.104-07:00kya hai ye ?
kavita hai ki aah ka dariya hai.........kya hai ye ?<br />kavita hai ki aah ka dariya hai...............<br />shabd hain ki hizra ka tarjumaa hai...............<br />bhasha hai ki aag ka gubbaar hai.........<br />hay <br />hay<br />hay<br />yon laga maano kisi ne patti khol kar <br />zakhm dikhaa diye hon.........<br /><br />shamaaji, aapne toh aaj udaas kar diya <br />is sanjeeda rachnaa k liye aapko <br />dili mubaaraqbaad !Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09116344520105703759noreply@blogger.com