tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post4072578717300423030..comments2023-10-10T02:40:54.602-07:00Comments on Kavita: दरारें.....!shamahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15550777701990954859noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-68566087474551631482009-04-13T13:15:00.000-07:002009-04-13T13:15:00.000-07:00Not said by me and do not know who said it, but a ...Not said by me and do not know who said it, but a great thought akin to expressed by you"<BR/>"waqt-e-piriN dosto ki berukhi ka kya gila,<BR/>har koi chalta hai bach ke girti hui deevaron se"<BR/><BR/>Thanks for your visit on my blog.ktheLeo (कुश शर्मा)https://www.blogger.com/profile/03513135076786476974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-47830960907393574672009-03-31T05:05:00.000-07:002009-03-31T05:05:00.000-07:00HAI KAUN SEE DEEWAR VO, JISME NAHEEN DARAR ,AA JH...HAI KAUN SEE DEEWAR VO, JISME NAHEEN DARAR ,<BR/>AA JHANK KAR KE DEKHEN TO,RISHTON KE AAR PAAR .'sammu'https://www.blogger.com/profile/14229365402897819232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-4422263918755620622009-03-30T03:09:00.000-07:002009-03-30T03:09:00.000-07:00रिश्तोंमे पड़ीं, दरारें इतनी,के, मर्रम्मत के क़ाबिल ...रिश्तोंमे पड़ीं, दरारें इतनी,<BR/>के, मर्रम्मत के क़ाबिल नही रही,<BR/>छूने गयी जहाँ भी, दीवारें गिर गयीं..<BR/> behad khhobdurat jiप्रवीण पराशरhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07955982931575293349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-18907518422486055112009-03-19T12:17:00.000-07:002009-03-19T12:17:00.000-07:00रिश्तोंमे पड़ीं, दरारें इतनी,के, मर्रम्मत के क़ाबि...रिश्तोंमे पड़ीं, दरारें इतनी,<br>के, मर्रम्मत के क़ाबिल नही रही,<br><br>बहुत खूब लिखा है,<br>I can only add to say that,<br>"दिल है के मेरा ,जैसे एक खाली मकान है,<br>ज़रजर तो हो गया है मगर आलीशान है!"<br><br>"हैं हवाएं भी सर्द, और अन्धेरा भी घना,<br>शम्मा चाहे कि नहीं उसे हर हाल में जलना होगा!" <br>To read the complete गज़ल do visit www.sachmein.blogspot.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-7623048206899590952009-03-20T02:27:00.000-07:002009-03-20T02:27:00.000-07:00kaaphi achhi kavita hai... aapaki kavitaaon me kuc...kaaphi achhi kavita hai... aapaki kavitaaon me kuchh naya dekhane ko milata hai ...jaari rakhe...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com