tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post716264574797528740..comments2023-10-10T02:40:54.602-07:00Comments on Kavita: दरख्त का सच!shamahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15550777701990954859noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-78490564567042295702009-12-10T03:02:54.620-08:002009-12-10T03:02:54.620-08:00zindagi ek vriksh hai kai shaakhao me bati hui ,si...zindagi ek vriksh hai kai shaakhao me bati hui ,sinchte hai jise raat din mehnat se isse anjaan ho ki fal kya milega .bas ek umeed rahti hai saath ......ज्योति सिंहhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092900119898490662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-2186224273766650922009-11-23T16:57:37.472-08:002009-11-23T16:57:37.472-08:00पौधे से दरख़्त तक का सलार बेमिसाल है .......... बह...पौधे से दरख़्त तक का सलार बेमिसाल है .......... बहुत अछा लिखा है ........दिगम्बर नासवाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11793607017463281505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-10129296606139672102009-11-21T10:43:50.606-08:002009-11-21T10:43:50.606-08:00Darakh hame kya nahee dete/dikhate...ham apnee apa...Darakh hame kya nahee dete/dikhate...ham apnee apadhapime na jane kitna andekha kar guzarte hain...Rashmi ji se sahmat hun...alfaaz nahee is rachnaake liye!shamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15550777701990954859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-52016380610508553632009-11-21T06:16:23.522-08:002009-11-21T06:16:23.522-08:00इस रचना के लिए शब्द नहीं ....... बहुत ही बढ़िया , ...इस रचना के लिए शब्द नहीं ....... बहुत ही बढ़िया , मैं निःशब्द हूँरश्मि प्रभा...https://www.blogger.com/profile/14755956306255938813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-88485430441700557642009-11-21T05:56:50.398-08:002009-11-21T05:56:50.398-08:00लाजवाब। शोषण के कई प्रतिरूप इस कविता के कथ्य के अं...लाजवाब। शोषण के कई प्रतिरूप इस कविता के कथ्य के अंग बने हैं। <br />शहर क्या देखें कि हर मंजर में छाले पड़ गये,<br />ऐसी गरमी थी कि पीले फूल काले पड़ गये।मनोज कुमारhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08566976083330111264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-71021036050097678782009-11-21T05:37:00.829-08:002009-11-21T05:37:00.829-08:00zindagi ke yatharth ko bodh karati rachna har pal ...zindagi ke yatharth ko bodh karati rachna har pal ka ahsaas kara gayi..........zindagi ko is nazariye se dekhne ka andaaz bahut bhaya.vandana guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00019337362157598975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841085546359509860.post-74821507589600744372009-11-21T03:46:21.347-08:002009-11-21T03:46:21.347-08:00umda.umda.Yogesh Verma Swapnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01456159788604681957noreply@blogger.com